Thread: Home in your Heart

Hello my name is Jason and I'm glad to be here with fellow Soundgarden fans. This is something that I wrote. If anyone has time I would love feedback. Hope all is well.

Home in your Heart

Exiled connoisseur, of forbidden pleasures
Scarlet letters carved in flesh
Exploring ancient catacombs of the unconscious
Searching for past lives and forgotten lovers
Scattered throughout the sands of time

Vanquished virtuoso, piecing together fragmented memories
And mysterious dreams, veiled in shadows
Channeling abstract and elusive sensations
To stimulate senses, no longer aroused
By the narrow spectrum of consciousness

Scavenging the obscure corners
Of the aficionado’s abandoned wasteland
Looking for the path to serenity
Tired legs and weary eyes wishing
To be home in your heart

Great word choice and imagery.
I applaud you,my good man.